Tag: 2023 writing year 5

How Tonga got its name

Retell: How Tonga got its name.

 

Planning:

Characters – who are the characters? Maui and tonga
Setting – where is the story set? In samoa and tonga
Beginning – how does it start? Maui has come to samoa and visited his friend.
Middle – what is happening? The friend lets him pick a  hook for him to us.
End – how does it end? He pulls up a island and names it tonga.

 

Listen

Make sure you use descriptive language to make the story more interesting. Pull the readers in to read YOUR writing, make it fun! You are going to need as much detail as you can as you will be creating a storyboard later on in the week.

 

Start your writing here:

 

→One day maui travelled to samoa to go see his friend.Once he got there he went of to go find tonga which was his friends name.Once he got to his friends store he said hi and the friend showed him some hooks maui asked what do i have to do to get one.To get one his friend said.You have to name a island after me.ok said maui and the friend let him choose a hook.He choose a old with spider webs on it and fish skin.Muai there the rope in and try to pull it up but was too heavy to pull once it was becoming night he finely pulled it up and it was and island.He named the after his friend tonga and thats how tonga got its name. 

 

little red riding hood.

There was a little girl named little red riding hood one day  her mum told her to go give  some muffins to make her grandma feel better.Then she set of to the woods well she was walk she came across a wolf the wolf asked what are you doing out here alone little girl.Little red riding hood said i am visiting my grandma because she is sick.the wolf said were does your grandma live little girl.she said up that path at the end her house is there.the wolf said why don’t you pick some flowers for your grandma she will love it.Little red riding hood said good idea.Then little red riding hood went out a little from the path and picked some flowers for her grandma when she was ready to go visit her grandma she took the path she told the wolf to.As she was walking up the hill she a wood cutter and said hello as she has never seen him before.he said hello back and then she kpeet on walking  then she made it as she was opening the door she saw her grandma but she looked a little off.when she walked in she asked the grandma do you want some muffins and the grandma said of course i want some.as she was getting one the wolf jumped up and tried to eat her then the little girl scream the wood cutter run in to the house and chop the wolf in half.the little girl said were is my grandma she they looked in the wardrobe and she was in there they took her out and ask if she was OK she said yes and they all ate muffin together the end.

Ham and cheese toastie.

Task Description:This week we did our writing about ham and cheese toasties.We had to write about all the stuff we had to use.Butter,Grated cheese,Ham,bread,
Butter knife,plate,chopping board,toasted machine,
Step 1.get all of your stuff ready, step 2.Turn on the machine,step 3.wash your hands,step 4.put your two slices of bread on the chopping bored,step 5.butter your bread with a butter knife,step 6.put your ham on your bread then flip on side of the bread over,step 7.put your bread in the machine.take and then you got ham and cheese toastie.

Camp thank you letter.

Task Description:Last week we went to camp and had so much fun.We had to make a thank you letter for all the people that help out with camp.I am give a big thank you to all the teachers and Mr Burt.We have had camp for 32 year now at Pt England School.

 

Thank you Mr Burt for doing the kayaking for us and the rest of team four.Thank you to the people who cooked our food to eat and the security for watching us and keeping us safe for the two night.A big thank you to all the teacher for lets this camp happen.

 

A thank you to Mr Burt and Mr jay for making this camp 32 years ago.This was bets time for my life and i got to hang outwith my friends and do fun activities. 

 

                                                       

Madison

130 Point England Road

Point England

Auckland

1071

 

Mr Burt

130 point England Road

 

3\13\2023

 

Dear Mr Burt

   

 

Yours sincerely, 

Maddison

Capital letters.

Task Description:This week we have been doing recounts for writing.We have done our writing test for this week.It was so fun and i was a bit nevus  because it was a test.This task is about Capital letters were we have to put the Capital letters in the right place.

7 Harehuka Drive

elsdon

 

12 january 2002

 

dear HoaniI have really enjoyed living in Wellington since june.  I have made some friends at my new School, which is Rata School 

 

on Paremata street.  My teacher is Mrs rapana.  She is all right.  In our classroom we have a pet mouse called mr snow.  It is my job to clean the mouse house on tuesdays.

 

We have visited lots of interesting places like the museum, te papa.  I went to See rugby at the Westpac trust stadium in september.  It was awesome to see Jonah charge down the field.

 

I am still playing rugby.  i play for the norths rugby club now.  We train on wednesdays.  My new friend Callum is in my team too.

 

Would you like to come and stay with us in the next holidays?  I hope you will.  say hi to all my old friends, especially to everyone at whenuapai rugby club.

 

Your friend

Jamie

holiday.

Me and my family went down to the south island for a holiday .There was about 15 people coming that was my family.We first went to wellington.Then we went on a boat to the real south island.We even went to queens town and went on the luge.Then we ate some food and got back to out hotel.then we out for a swim in the pool with everyone.The next day we packed up and left to this boat place a 5 am.When we got on the boat there was  lot of people and food.we went outside and saw seals and a waterfall we in.Then after that we set of home and it was so long we got there a 1 am at night.

My recount.

 Frist: On a Friday afternoon team 4 and team 5 went to the school hall.There was a duffy assembly on for team 5 and 4.Duffy had introduced himself to the team five and four.There were four more people with duffy there name was stuffy and the dad   stuff-zip and duff-zip.

 

Next:They started the play and in first few mins they started of by the dad coming in and tell duffy that stuffy was coming over for the weekend.Duffy was not happy then he got hungry and made some space noodles that were blue.Then stuffy arrived and
came into  duffy room.They went sleep and duffy was sleeping then stuffy came in a woke up duffy and told him that she could not sleep so duffy let stuffy sleep with duffy.Then duffy could not sleep but when stuffy was asleep then a big portal open and duffy went inside.He saw people could stuf-zip and duff-zip and he got stuck in space then they found the right portal and he left back to home.

 

Finally:he went back to sleep with stuffy and he had the best night thats all duffy could talk about.